Excellent....total awe nothing for me to say!!!

Aww, very sad. It was well written and made sense and was lovely to read.
well done
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Wow, Sarah. This brought a tears to my eyes. This poem was really sad, yet really good! Your emotions you expressed were strong and clear. Your flow and rhyming didn't seem rocky to me. This was a great piece. And, thank you for your comment. =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

This very touching poem flowed well while delivering its point excellently

That is so sad. It made me get all teary-eyed. You did such a great job on this. It's such a beautiful poem. I'm sorry that you had to go through all of that. You described everything perfectly in this poem though. 5/5 Keep it up & Stay strong! :)

Wow---a really touching poem-I could definately tell that you put a lot of emotion into it! It was really well written and had a nice flow-great write! 5/5

Wow, i understood without the explanationa dn i loved it. i know the situation. the only differenc eis my love lost a girl who i remind him of so things just wouldnt work out. i truly love it. keep it up

That was really sad... and i understood the poem and the explanation. really a good job. if you could read some of my poems that would be great...

Plucked Daisy
Sick of Waiting
First True Love
Undeniable

thanks, terribly appreciated! 5/5

What an excellent poem, such a heart felt piece, I love the powerful wording you have used, def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care hun. Sarah x

Ohh hunni, this was to heartfelt and lovely written, it really touched my heart...I am so sorry for you first love, it must be really hard to lose a parent at such young age and I know how hard it is to let go of your first love and have to see him with some one else....I really feel your pain. I wanna thank you for your lovely comment on my poem "Ana", I am really sorry to hear about your loss....Please don't think that I don't appreciate your advice, becaue I really do, but I am just too far in and I can't seem to get out....And poeple who don't have ED will never know how it is to live with it, no matter what, I will always be Ana and Mia and it's not like I love to live like this, but to me this is just a life I have to live and something I have to deal with every day....And trust me I think about death every day, but like all poeple always say "It will never happen to me", I know I shouldn't say that, but well ya know....Thank you so much for reading and commenting my poem hunni....

Much Love Sabrina

This is sooooo sad and whats sadder yet is that with the situation that he left you in the process although people handle the loss of a loved one differently, its just too bad that you ended up losing him as well! :(( Big hugs from Ohio!! I thought this was a excellent write!

Wow. this is really good. I really like it. I love it so much well keep up the good work. Sorry about your lost 5/5
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jess

Awh, Wow. Thats really sad. IT WAS SO AMAZING. Tear's lined my eyes. I no how hard it is. Roughly 2 months ago my boyfriends mother passed away from cancer too. it's an extremely hard thing to get through. By the way the poem was beautiful!

Amberinaa

OMG!! WOW!! I don't know what to say..This poem is great..so heartfelt and so amazing..I'm so sorry it's true though..I know how hard it must have been..This poem was absolutely great though..keep writing..
Crystal

This is a wonderful poem. Very well written. It holds a melancholy story, and had me in tears. I'm glad you also explained at the end; not many authors do. Your poem was clear but it's nice and refreshing to hear the poet explaining, either way. A definite 5.

Loved it

I swear im like addicted to your poems.. there so great i loved this one.. its so deep