I thought it flowed very well. The rhyming was very good too. You put a lot of emotion into it. It didn't seem unique though, and unique poems are always remembered more. Don't get me wrong though, this was a good poem.

"You became my best friend,
And I shared all my dreams,
There was one I kept though,
That of my wildest schemes."
^^I really liked like stanza. Good job. =]
Cayce Lee

Nice one, i really like it.5/5

I really liked this poem. I thought it was very well written, great choice of words, and flowed perfectly. I didn't feel like the rhyming was forced so it worked wonderfully. I thought it was a beautiful poem. Great job. I can't really relate to it on a literal level but I kinda know what you mean. xD
Keep it up I look forward to reading your poetry in the future.
5/5 for sure
Breanna

Wow---love this poem! I thought every line really added to the poem- It was a good topic to write about and you described the emotions involved with it well. Great write! definately 5/5

Aw wow hun. This was a little sad. It was really really good though. Your flow was pretty good. =)

I thought you worded it great. I don't think there's anything that should be changed. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I UNDERSTAND hehe... gosh that's all i do is hear about it day and day out!!!... lol JUST KIDDING ILU!

great poem my darling!!!

Love Ya!!!

XoMousieoX

What a great poem, i hope you get your chance with this guy, that would make me smile :)

Great job

--Steph

Yes yes i know i've already commented this poem... IDC hehe... IT WORKED JOY!!!! HAHA!!! well, actually all of them worked!!! you got what you wanted! I'm sooo happy for you!! You deserve it! Now I gotta go back and write that poem for you... remember when you left the comment on the one poem I wrote about myself?? how I had to write one for you? well i don't have any r problems to write about, so i'll start that poem haha... ilu!!!

X0Mousie0X

Pretty good! keep it up!

Well, i can understand this completely b/c i can relate to this ALOT!! This is/has happened to me before and it's a horrible feeling..but the poem was awesome, i loved it!

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
Also thanks for your comment on my poem If I, I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)