Thi sis depressing and very deep so much emotion going on i lvoe it xxoroxyxox

Wow great poem and i mean it!
you have alot of talent to write a poem like this =]
great work keep it up =]
stay strong
5/5
lovelove
Alice
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WOAH SARAH.......U kno i love u but i think i hav to propose HAHAAHA jj babe.
its really good, and because i titled it its even betta!! =) hahaha well donr
xx love u foreva and alwaysxx

Thats an awsome poem nice rhymin

Nice work.... its creative, and it's got a great flow. Keep it up.

-Emmmmers

Hey amazing poem. youve got crazy talent to be able to write like that. great choice of words too.
dee

Wow i like it alot. i can feel hte emotion in it.. i kno how u feel too. i can relate to this.. thanks for commenting on my poem.. it means so much to me.. well keep on writing and i will keep on reading
take care
luve angie

Very emotional poem w/o a doubt and some of the things you have said i can relate. Very nice flow at the same time.
^_^

Yay great poem peanut

I really liked that. def 5/5. keep writing. ellen x

AWW THIS WAS AN AWSOEM POEM :) I LIEK THE WAY IT RYMED AND STUFF AND IT KINDA RELATES TO ME SO YEA .. AWSOEM :)

Awww, I love this poem my little darling. It was amazing. -Hugs- Very sad. ;[

Sorry, I cannot rate this poem very high, due to the fact it is one long unfinished sentence. 2.5

I so do not agree with "ryan"! i mean this poem being just a long sentence gives it all of its rhyme! u choose the perfect words and place them in the best place in the poem! fantastic, 5/5

Great job again!!! i like how you used short stanza's!!!!!! it is such a good poem keeep it up

Not many ppl can write poems with only 2 words in each line, and for it to make sense.

well done. clap clap.

5/5 David

Ok...i have read only 3 of your poems now and i feel all the emotion that you put inside them, you are a wonderful writer when you can put that much emotion into your writing, I love your writing. This poem is one of my favorites

~brittany

This poem right here is amazing i definitly loved the style you used by making the lines short. and the ryhme was great. Good job on this poem 5/5 from me~mel

WOW! F u c k * n hell that is amazing!!! (sorry for swearing but it was necessary lol) I loved how it was only two or three lines to eaach line and how the stanza'a were done. Over all, fu c k * n amazin u managed to rhyme it all perfectly not cliched at all, not many people could pull that off. Gawd! I've rated it 5/5!!!

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Keep up the goooood work!!

Very original and the rhyme scheme worked really really well. i loved how each stanza was short because it suited the poem. it was very sad with a powerful ending.