In Love Forever More (Sedoka)

by Italian Stallion   Jul 3, 2006


In love forever
Holding hands, while laying tight
Watching the stars at midnight

Kissing all night long
Hearing waves upon the beach
While cuddling with you all night

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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The Sedoka is an unrhymed poem made up of
two three-line katauta with the following syllable
counts: 5/7/7, 5/7/7.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Here you have painted a great picture of love......very romantic....5/5 like always

  • 17 years ago

    by *_Clara_*

    Nice poem, i love your poems
    they all are intresting and writen very well
    keep it up ; )

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    Nice poem ;) great job !

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
    I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Mmkay. I thought I should leave a real comment this time.

    In love forever more
    [It has 6 syllabes. Should have 5.]
    Hearing the waves upon the beach
    [It has 8 syllables. Should have 7.]

    Maybe try and re-word it or something. Iuno. It was good though. Probably better than my Sedoka.

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