Soaking Up The Rays (Haiku)

"Hear the ocean's Breeze"

Very vivid and I liked how you capitalized breeze.

"And the waves at the sunny beach"

I felt like you repeated to many "the"s, maybe reword to this:

Dancing waves at the light beach"

"Soaking up the rays"

I liked this line, though I think you repeated "the" too much.

4/5 from me, a cute haiku, take care.

~MaryAnne

Nice. The image of a sunny beach is perfectly presented and cptures the Haiku form as it should.

Nice n sweet
God bless u

Your second sentence,
Has but six of seven, see?
A quick edit, now?

:-)