Naive Nebula

by put the [boom boom] into my heart   Jul 3, 2006


Some days
You can sit under the stars
And stare at them for hours
As you sit
They inspire you
Make you want to do amazing things
Wish upon them
Fall in love under them
But other days
They fall on you
And you can't get away
They surround you

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  • 17 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Jeez...miss Ariana has some JELOUSY issues...just cuz she knows she'll never compare...so how about instead of changing her ending, Ariana, how about you change your FACE...ooohhh what now!!! Losernipple Numbbutt is OUT! lol i love you Cayti. xo

  • 17 years ago

    by .::Lovely*Letdown::.

    Yeah...wutever to the LAST comment...amazing as always cayti!! lol luv ya!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ariana

    This was an interesting piece, you write about a familiar subject but in a different way, making it sound new. I'd recommend changing the ending a bit because it doesn't sound finished - instead the last line sounds as if it is halfway through an idea. Apart from that though I enjoyed this poem - well done :)

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