Alone I Break

by RetroRavey   Jul 7, 2006


Here in the night,
Of this cold disgruntled heart,
I've given up
All my thoughts of dark.
Wanting for light,
Calling for tears,
Knowing that you
Would soon be here.
And alone I break,
Falling away
From what I had before.

I lived my life,
Knowing of hell,
Dreaming of you
And wishing you well.
Killing my hopes,
Stalling this love.
Knowing that you had never,
Taken my trust.
And alone I break,
Falling away,
From what I had before...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is very nice dear and it has a great flow in it. I really liked reading it. The consecutive rhymes are superb. God bless you

    5/5 for sure

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I love your poem.. its really good. keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Nice poem.. i rily like it.. 5/5 :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Neme juste un jouet

    Astounding.... perhaps I may cry for this and you deary..... and we both know that pity is not my character

    With Love
    Nemiah

  • 17 years ago

    by Neme juste un jouet

    Hmmm............. you know im not good with words.
    Genial, c'est beau. Aussi, c'est la vie...
    Tehe tehe. You know i love your work and am at loss for words.

    penible,
    Nem

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