YOU

by xlovelyxdespairx   Jul 8, 2006


You gave me bruises,
you gave me scars,
you used to be the one who catched my breath,
who catched my stars,
you were the one who was there,
you were the one who lifted my spirit in the air,
you were the one who made me smile,
a good smile that lasted for a long while,
but you just left me behind your back,
everything seems to me now,
that everything has just gone black,
I wish you were the person I knew,
the person I knew when it was me and you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Charlyn

    I love this poem.. it's so well written.. and expresses so much. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ...Rýáñ...

    Gr8 poem..

    thnx for the comment..

    plz read my other poem "white" :)

    Thnx.. Luv Ryan..

  • 17 years ago

    by sophie

    I lyk ur poem
    keep up da gd wrk
    Sophz xXx

  • 17 years ago

    by aja

    That was an excellent work. i loved the pain put into it. keep working and you will soon have a name in this buisiness :) much love, aja

  • 17 years ago

    by aja

    That was an excellent work. i loved the pain put into it. keep working and you will soon have a name in this buisiness :) much love, aja

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