Thinking

by «™Bleeding Heart»   Jul 9, 2006


She sat in her room
thinking about her life
whether it was worth living

everything was slowly falling apart
one bad thing after another
getting harder to fake her smile

one cut after another
the next deeper than the first
getting harder to breathe
as the tears began to fall

she watched the blood
run down her arms
as she laid down to sleep

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  • 17 years ago

    by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT

    I loved it.
    keep holding on
    *beth*
    -xox-

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Not great. Not bad but not geat. Missing some key element. Rather the same or similar to many. Didn't really enjoy this one except there was this one line that really stood out. Not very wowing or such. Did have this simple way that it was nearly straight-forward that made up for it.
    ~Faith-less

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