Torn in Two
by See Through Silouette Jul 9, 2006
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Left in my corner. Broken and alone. With my safe house being bombed, and theres NOTHING i can do. Feeling helpless and hopeless. Scared of who I am and will become. Scarred from the useless memories. Crying myself to sleep, smearing mascara tears, as i dive into an empty abyss. |
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16 years ago
by Kyle
Wow!! this poem can to life for me, i know how you feel and you wrote it so well. great job! 5/5
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17 years ago
Haha dude..i remember that night!! holy crap that got WAY out of hand! i felt really bad! lol sorry for pulling that on u kyle! haha but it's still an EXCELLENT poem for being written in like 2 minutes...LITERALLY! haha i love you!!
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17 years ago
I love this poems 5/5.....its so real & i think ever1 can relate to it once in a while
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17 years ago
Mmm i really like this one lil jov....i dont know i'f i'd capitalize forever at the end tho...i can't decide what i think of the effect of that yet...but i dunno yet...its very good tho! love you! xo
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17 years ago
by Kyle
I know exactly how u feel....i dont think greeley will ever be the same....no i know it wont be the same! this is going to sux soooooo much
