0ne midnight

by Ye Seul   Jul 10, 2006


Take me back to yesterday
which was filled with his kisses
like the sweetest candy you just tasted
like the deepest sea it surged infront
I still need his kisses to wake up

Take me back to yesterday
which was filled with his scents
like the young roses just started to bloom
like the puppy had shampoo
I still need his scents to breathe

God, why did you take him from me?
I know it is too late for us
but without him
there is no reason for living

I believe i can meet you again
when my body turns into heavy wood stick
when my blood turn into melted ice
and when the clock stops ringing
I believe we can take our yesterday back

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awwww. ye seul, this was soo good!! it has to be the best poem you have written! i loved it.. your descriptions are beautiful and the emotion was just so clear.. wonderful job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I liek this.
    very different to what im used to.
    not the same old same old...
    Omg he left stuff
    its very original.
    ~Emah
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ~Black*Rose~

    This poem is so deep, it makes the reader think allot, and that is something you don't find in allot of poems these days, YOu create Marvoluse pictures with your words.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aw this was so sad, im sorry:( I dont know what i would do without my boyfriend.I liked the idea of it and even though it didnt rhyme it still flowed really well.

    --Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    It was a strong poem with a lot of detailed words. I can see some of thes images you created. The emotions felt in this poem were great, an overall good dark poem. Keep on writing!

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