Awwww Happy Birthday Nat!!! I hope I wasn't late. Stupid Australian time :P hehe jks!..I hated celebrating my Birthday alone. Actually, it wasn't even a celebration, it was just a regular day. I was 13, worst experience ever!.. *hugs*

Awesome poem, I especially like this bit "What a pretty little razor you are,
I wonder if you can ruin my day?"

Keep writing dear.

xx

Aww Nat! HAPPY (belated) BIRTHDAY BABE. Your mom's a poo head:( Anyways, great poem.

--Steph

HAPPY SEVENTEENTH BiRTHDAY, TALEE!!!
Great poem! I think, maybe, since it`s your birthday, you should`ve written a more positive poem. But this was really good, and even it wasn`t your b-day, it was really convincing!
It was great, dear. =D
Love ya,

Samantha Hollywood

Omg...WOW! Hunni it was brilliant, amazing,wonderful..PERFECT!! i loved it and i am definitely speechless...it just wow! sorry i dont know what else to say!!! omggg it was soo sad, but soo good! you did a great great job on it!!!

Oh GOSH!!!!!!!!! is this true??? no, it can't be :O
I hope everything is going okay with you, happy birthday(belated) sorry lol.!
your poem was so teary, so heartfelt and fantastic!!
I love the ideas your bring, they always seem kinda new..at least for me!

very great work honey, 100/5 poem,lol!
beautifully written, loved the use of words in it. no matter how sad it is! short but meanungful and straight to the point

Keep it up
Yours
NemO xXxXxXxXxX

Happy birthday! now, with all these wishes from friends, you know you can't have a birthday alone! take care and keep writing - it shows the wonderful person you are inside.

peace
shobhana

I really, really liked this poem.
It is not only heartfelt, and sad, but sarcastic too.
It brought back a lot of memories for me, reading those words.
I think you are quite a talented writer, and i hope your birthday got better than it started out to be.

I really, really liked this poem.
It is not only heartfelt, and sad, but sarcastic too.
It brought back a lot of memories for me, reading those words.
I think you are quite a talented writer, and i hope your birthday got better than it started out to be.

This poem conveys great emotion, nobody should ever have to feel this way, but so many have to.

Awww:( i can relate my last 2 bday were like that. excellent work! i loved the emotion, and im sry:( 5/5

Awh so much emotion & such a good poem!
yes that little razor,
can ruin your day =\
keep up the writing though! 5/5

-sarah

You know this poem was really great and sometimes I wish I could just die too...just dissapear ..fall asleep and never wake up..I can really connect to it.keep it up.

Wow Nice poem. I Really enjoy poem.

Hey Natalie,

What a great touching poem.. Sad your birthday didn't happen the way you wanted. Hope everythings all okay =S

Laterz,
Shirlz.

Gr8 poem. it has alot of twist and turns. it seems that there's mor to it. very good rythme:)

Vent away my dearest darling, vent away. My family has forgotten my birthday before to. My mom does scrap booking so about six months afterward she asked me what we did for my birthday and I pointed out that she had done aboslutely nothing and after thinking about it she realized I was right, so I know how you feel. And no, the razor blade will not make it better, I can promise you that. Hugs!

-Tainted

Wow hey this is really sad, but its so kool...- i luv it =]

[xxx] leah [xxx]

Wow.. it happened me once but I was too sad to write about it.. I liked ur poem alot

good job & cnt wait to read more :)

Im sorry if your birthday sucked, my 16th one did too cause i was in rehab and i didnt get any present from anyone, not my nor my dad, but i hope that things get better for you and im VERY glad that you have a way to vent, but i hope that its just that and nothing more, i really hope that you didnt cut, i know i dont know you and this may seem weird but hey i am a very caring person, so if you ever need anyone to talk to im here for you, i;ll listen to whatever it is you have to say and help you all that i can, my email is insomnia_freak23@hotmail.com so add me if you ever need anyone to talk to
by the way i give you a 5 on your poem i would give you 10 if i could but the rating only goes to 5 :) great job on expressing your emotions, i like it, you should check mine out some time, well peace out good job