Comments : Forever and Always

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie


    What's with all the getting married poems? ..Are you getting married? Lmao. You better invite me to the wedding if you are =P

    But this was soooo cute. Made me smile =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie


    Half of my comment didn't go there?

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Lol.. Sorry!!

    I know why now. Cause I made an arrow sign. Lol

    After I said "Made me smile" I basicly said this..

    The flow and rhyming and all that was really really good. And it was soooo cute. And I wish I could write a love poem this good. Lol.

    Annnnnd, You're not late. Lol.. It's still my birthday for another 2 hours. Lol =P

  • 16 years ago

    by Kara !

    This is very beautiful, and I feel slightly love sick now.

    I don't have anything particularly interesting to say - this tends to happen when I can't find fault.

    "Her eyes glistened through her veil,
    Like something out of a fairy tale."

    It's so sweet. It's one of those poems that actually make me smile.

    It really is truely wonderful Darien. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    no critiscism from me
    a well-deserving 5/5
    it was stunningly beautful.
    no flaw at all.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Awww! Lovely! that was so sweet and so well written, it blew me away, great job on this.


    P.S. Thanks for the comment on my poem

  • 16 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    Could picture each verse.
    Your a great writer. xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Gothic Princess

    Awwww thats a heart jerker....I loved the feeling and raw emotion Darien....great poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww That was soooooo sweet Darien...i loved it just loved it, i hope one day i can find a guy like you are soo sweet!! it was a great and very emotional poem, it definitely made me smile! great job

  • 16 years ago

    by not a poet

    Amazing, i loved it! this was one of the best rhyming scheme's i have ever read, i normally hate it when poems rhyme, but i honestly loved this one! amazing job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Damn... Such a beautiful piece. SO much love and devotion! I really enjoyed this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shawna

    I enjoyed this poem, it was very simply written, but very cute!! Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    So the flow had been extremely well done. I really enjoed this because of not only the words but the flow and imagery. I really enjoyed this piece. Really enjoyed this a lot cuz this had been written quite well. Usually I don't read this type of genre but I'm glad that I did for this.

  • 16 years ago

    by J Lau

    Absolutely wonderful. Great flow and rhyme not to mention the context itself. Brilliant. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Awww!! Darien!!! That was soo sweet!! I loved it! I wish I could write happy love poems like that! Lol. When ever I try they always turn out bad. Anyways, this poem was just so beautiful it made me smile!! Great job!

    Cayce x

  • 16 years ago

    by MemoirsOfMe

    I thought it was beautiful, and the way you told this story of love was picturesquely expressed. Each line had its on intricate meaning and it all came together as a lovely piece of work. Very well done, it was just divine.

  • 16 years ago

    by NannO

    Aww.. that was soo cute!! i loved it from A-Z!! lol, funny, im not into that kinda thing, but i guess u just got the talent.. i thot that was very well written, amazing rhyme and gr8 flow..ur rhyming words seemed to come easy to u.. i absolultely loved the first stanza.. it def stood out, flaunting:P hehe, i cud totally feel the love in the poem.. its just so adorable!! :P hehe

    the last stanza was just awesome, too.. esp the last line, it reli shows the love and devotion.. that ull be together for the rest of ur lives.. loved the title, too..
    keep it up
    ur gr8
    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Wow -- This was really good! I`m shocked. Speechless.
    It was terrific. 5/5
    Much thanks for your comment

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 16 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... that is so sweet. It made me cry! Did you get married? Either way this poem is amazing. The flow was really good, pretty much flawless. It somewhat reminds me of how my brother's wedding was. But anyways, I love this poem. It was very descriptive and I love how you described as an angel, very sweet. Great job on this!

  • 16 years ago

    by Juls

    I usually dont read love poems after this guy broke my heart so this is a first for me in awhile.

    I liked the format you wrote in. Although it isnt really orginal. You seem like a talented writter so my suggestion is to give yourself a more of a challenge.

    great work though keep it up