by the love of another fills my soul Jul 11, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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What is it that I do? |
by Jessica
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This was pretty good.. there were a few places where the flow didn't work and you repeated already used words.. but the descriptions worked well and the emotion was strong. 4/5 |
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Our words may speak loud but our actions speak louder. |
by Demian
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Baby reed my poem when u have a chance ok |