So Bad

by Heather   Jul 11, 2006


I think about you everyday.
And it hurts so bad.
I miss you more everyday.
And it hurts so bad.
I wish I had never met you, anyways.
And it hurts so bad.
I thought I loved you, by the way.
And it hurts so bad.
I felt you slip away.
And it hurts so bad.

All these things hurt me so bad.
I wish the thoughts of you would go away.
And it hurts so bad.

This poem is dedicated to J.J.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The repition worked very well, and i loved every line of this poem, keep writing, you have some good talent there
    xxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    Dude i can sooo relate this is rly good i rly like it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I liked the repitition of it. I thought you could say this though "And it hurts me so bad" I dunno. Just a suggestion. It was a sad poem though. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Very sad but i think the repetativeness got a little too much and the lines in between could be more deep and meaningful as far as the image you ere trying to put across. I also think "anyways" should be "anyway". A very emotional poem, a good job and keep writing. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aw, i'm sorry for your pain, this is so sad. I was a good poem, everything rhymed and it really shows creativitiy that you could find so many thingd you rhyme with "everyday" Great work on this one.

    --Steph

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