by Darien Jul 12, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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In The Graveyard |
by Nix
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Superb poem, imagery is excellent and you painted incredible picture with emotions. Some lines are simply amazing, very original too. I like your wording and you wrote it greatly. Well done, you should be proud on this piece, some of your thoughts that you described in this poem are depressive but anyway that just add more effect. Well done, you really deserves 5/5 on this one. |
by Kaila
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Woah this is excellent |
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Another Amazing Job...Your an amazing write...5/5 |
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Excellent. Your choice of words for this is wonderful. I love the idea of lifes struggles coming to a united end. |
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It all ending tragically with one last breath. |