Time heals a broken heart...
Such sadness in this one.
Keep on writing on what u feel and like kabs.

I Believe in you.

God Bless!

I could feel the sadness behind the words. Great write, very well expressed.

Sad writing,well expressed,but still needs work on the structure.Go on,keep working,I like the way your emotions touch your words!!!

This poem is so nice, and written so nicely....... once again you have showed your great talent........ keep it up

Great write! But I still had a problem with the flow. But I loved the poem. 5/5

Keep up the great work

Love
Letty

Good poem, i got confused with the flow, but all in all, i liked it

I like this poem very much. It is very interesting. You described emotions very well.
But deep inside
I felt my heart
Is melting away
All night alone i was cried
Tears are pouring like a rain
^this is my favorite stanza. 5/5

I can relate to it.
You described emotions greatly, and the atmosphere in the poem is excellently created.
Just two suggestions:
1. Capitalize I in some stanzas
2. Don't repeat the same word too often, like you did with "hard".
The rest of the poem is great, and the ending -the last line- is very effective like conclusion.
Keep up, 5/5

Again the emotion is so powerful. I think the only thing you can do is to widen your vocabulary. Try to find some stronger words. I really liked this part:

I felt I'm drowning with my tears

Amazing Job

5/5

Good poem, except there's those grammatical errors that make it look bad. Work on it a bit. 4/5

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OMG i love this poem i so can relate to it this stanza the most and in my opinion is the best

"Nobody knows how hard
I keep this pain inside
I'll always smile and laugh
Just to let them know I'm alright
And everything is OK"
this poem was soo emotional and flowed so well i luv it, im adding it to my favs
5/5

Amazing.
this was a great poem.
loved it from the beginnging to the end.
could really feel the emotion and sadness in it

I felt I'm drowning with my tears
I don't know
How could i stop my tears to pour

loved that part

5/5