I Can't Forget

by StephanieH   Jul 13, 2006


I Can't Forget
What Happened Today
It Only Took One Second
For My Life To Turn Gray

I Feel Hated For Expressing
The Way I Feel
I Feel A Need For Protesting
Against What's Real

You Won't Hear Me Out
For What I Have To Say
Just Let Me Once Shout
Or Even Kneel Down And Pray

Just Listen To Me
And What I Have To Say
Just Let Me Be
Let Me Go My Way

I Will Do What It Takes
To give me a better life
There Will No Longer Be
Any Part Of Me You Can Cause Strife

Therefore,Just Let Me Apologize
For What I've Done
So You Can Disappear
Or Even Run

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  • 17 years ago

    by She Is Now Gone Away

    Very well written and i believe many ppl can relate to how you feel and what your trying to express in this poem

    Lizzy

  • 17 years ago

    by Jesus

    Nice, i dont know why babygirl would say its NOT long, i hate long poems, they make me sleepy.... anyway Nice Poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by DreamAwish

    Wow so much emotion.. well done :) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by ytghgjkh

    I like this, it's not a long poem but it's very well writtin... nice write! keep up the good work
    with love
    Jenny

  • 17 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Very nicely done. I would change this stanza a little...so it flows better:

    I Do What It Takes
    To Make Me Better
    There Will No Longer Be
    Pieces Of Me That You Can Shredder

    Read it out loud and then maybe do something like this:

    I Will Do What It Takes
    To give me a better life
    There Will No Longer Be
    Any part of me you can cause strife

    Or some variation of that. I like to read my poems aloud before I share them with people....so I catch any issues with flow. Our mind will read into what we write, what we intended...the spoken word does not stand loyally by our side...Keep writing, you have talent and you write with your heart, which is what counts.

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