Comments : Destroyed By My Own Mind

  • 13 years ago

    by Heather

    Wow... this was a very powerful poem.
    The lines were short, and it flowed very well. This was an excellent poem.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Rena

    This was very powerful, i get the depression thing..it sucks..im glad you are writing to get your feelings out!!

  • 13 years ago

    by unbelievable life

    This is amazing its very good btw thnx for the comment sweetie!
    DemonAngel

  • 13 years ago

    by Purple

    Amazing, wonderful, strong... You have real talent, but I bet you've heard that plenty of times before. I'm not going tell you what's good about your poem, because it seems you don't need to improve, instead I'll just tell you how much I love your poetry. I do love your poetry, and will continue coming back to read, if not comment.

    ~Purple~

  • 13 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow! This is great!! Very powerful! 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by donna

    You really are a very talented poet.. You get the feeling and emotion across so strongly in Your work. Excellent once again 5/5 xx

  • 13 years ago

    by Mezmeryz

    Wow!!! i love this poem because its so precise and fluent and beautifully written! man i dont know how to explain it...but all your poems are just so ----perfect...i think thats the right word :)
    keep it up!
    xx

  • 13 years ago

    by xoOrdinaryGirlox

    This is an amazing poem. You are very talented and should keep it up. I can feel all the emotion that has been put into this poem. Very strong. 5/5.

    ..X..Jo..X..