Amazing, wonderful, strong... You have real talent, but I bet you've heard that plenty of times before. I'm not going tell you what's good about your poem, because it seems you don't need to improve, instead I'll just tell you how much I love your poetry. I do love your poetry, and will continue coming back to read, if not comment.
Wow!!! i love this poem because its so precise and fluent and beautifully written! man i dont know how to explain it...but all your poems are just so ----perfect...i think thats the right word :)
keep it up!