Don't Know Where To Start....First Off I Want To Say How Impressed I'am With Your Growth...I Can't Find a Mistake In This Poem...You Put a Smile On My Face Because Your Talanted And You Have So Much Potential And You've Put It All Into This Poem And It Shined Through...I Love You So Much & I'm Proud To Say I Love Your Poetry 2...No Wonder Your First On My "Favourites"
This was really good! I think its sweet how you dedicated this poem to someone, it really held a lot of emotion and I thought it was really nice. You`re a great writer, thanks for sharing this poem with me. I`ve read some of your earlier work, and, throughout this break you took, you`ve really improved. Great job! 5/5
Please, what I said about the typing - don`t take it personally. But, please, take it into consideration.
Like Samantha said, great emotion. i feel the same way, wanting someone to see that ive grown up and am different. im sure many can relate. good repitition with the "To you," effective, but not overused. good job!
Awsome Poem!!! Sometimes The Ones Who Love Us The Most Are The Ones That Wont Let Us Grow Up!!! My Parents Still Treat Me Like Im 5 And I Hate It But Then I Know Its Only Because they Are Afraid Of Letting Me Go!!
OH... this is one of my favorite poems!! it is full of emotions and the words you used to describe the life flow really well.. i hope you write the great poems like this again...and good job on this.. 5/5
I really like this poem in it. It holds so much strength. You did an amazing job on this and hopefully the person that you wrote this to will see the new, older you. It's very well written and the flow and rhythm was good. Great job on this! 5/5
Awww.. that was very good.. the descriptions were amazing.. the emotion was loud and clear.. but i did not like the flow.. it was very difficult to read.. none of the stanza's or lines were the same lenght and this made it hard to read.. try and fix that up and it will be better.. 5/5