Comments : From A Boy To A Man (To You..)

  • 14 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    I really liked it. It flowed well. and though today I have begun to lose interest in reading poetry for the day I couldn't help but read this one over and over.

    ~~Retniapdoolb--Julie

  • Don't Know Where To Start....First Off I Want To Say How Impressed I'am With Your Growth...I Can't Find a Mistake In This Poem...You Put a Smile On My Face Because Your Talanted And You Have So Much Potential And You've Put It All Into This Poem And It Shined Through...I Love You So Much & I'm Proud To Say I Love Your Poetry 2...No Wonder Your First On My "Favourites"
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

    Did I Forget To Mention 5/5??

  • 14 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Darin -
    This was really good! I think its sweet how you dedicated this poem to someone, it really held a lot of emotion and I thought it was really nice. You`re a great writer, thanks for sharing this poem with me. I`ve read some of your earlier work, and, throughout this break you took, you`ve really improved. Great job! 5/5
    Please, what I said about the typing - don`t take it personally. But, please, take it into consideration.

    Samantha Hollywood

  • Like Samantha said, great emotion. i feel the same way, wanting someone to see that ive grown up and am different. im sure many can relate. good repitition with the "To you," effective, but not overused. good job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Heather

    This poem was great. The flow was amazing, and it had a lot of emotion. You are a great writer, keep up the good work.

  • 14 years ago

    by Princess09

    Awsome Poem!!! Sometimes The Ones Who Love Us The Most Are The Ones That Wont Let Us Grow Up!!! My Parents Still Treat Me Like Im 5 And I Hate It But Then I Know Its Only Because they Are Afraid Of Letting Me Go!!
    ~~Sweetie

  • 14 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    OH... this is one of my favorite poems!! it is full of emotions and the words you used to describe the life flow really well.. i hope you write the great poems like this again...and good job on this.. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Another one of your stunning poems!! your style is unique and the way you explain your emotions is so real!!
    keep writing, another 5/5 from me =)

  • 14 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really like this poem in it. It holds so much strength. You did an amazing job on this and hopefully the person that you wrote this to will see the new, older you. It's very well written and the flow and rhythm was good. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awww.. that was very good.. the descriptions were amazing.. the emotion was loud and clear.. but i did not like the flow.. it was very difficult to read.. none of the stanza's or lines were the same lenght and this made it hard to read.. try and fix that up and it will be better.. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I believe I can relate to this poem even at my age I have written one with the same thoughts somewhat

  • 14 years ago

    by Synh

    Awesome. You have an unbelievable talent that I so admire.