YaY! I Found Out How To Comment...Ok...Well First Off This Poem Is Not "Corny" Like You Told Me You Thought It Was...Actually I Liked It Alot Alot!...Good Metaphors...I Was Smiling All The Way Through And The Only Thing I Could Think Of Was "Aww" Not Just Because It Was Sweetly Written And Sounded Cute Coming From You...But Because I'm Proud To Know That My Brother Has The Talent To Write Various Poem Types...& Thats One Thing I Cant Do
*Keep It Up* ..I Luv u 5/5xoxo-Nikk
Aww... omg, that made me cry! You did such a great job on this and whoever you wrote this for is very lucky! I absolutely loved this. You described everything so beautifully and expressed your emotions very well. Great job on this! 5/5
This was so beautiful, It is so hard to lose the one you love so intensely.You are so right it affects every part of you,not just your heart, If this is real I hope you are healing and ready to love again.