Comments : Past Tense Love

  • YaY! I Found Out How To Comment...Ok...Well First Off This Poem Is Not "Corny" Like You Told Me You Thought It Was...Actually I Liked It Alot Alot!...Good Metaphors...I Was Smiling All The Way Through And The Only Thing I Could Think Of Was "Aww" Not Just Because It Was Sweetly Written And Sounded Cute Coming From You...But Because I'm Proud To Know That My Brother Has The Talent To Write Various Poem Types...& Thats One Thing I Cant Do
    *Keep It Up* ..I Luv u 5/5xoxo-Nikk

  • 14 years ago

    by Ye Seul

    I really liked this stenza.. it shows your feelings well enough to imagine easily.

    Loving her,
    Was more than just love itself.
    Because, not only did it come from my heart,
    But every single part
    Of me.

    How sweet!!! The descriptions are wonderful..You are a great poet... i like it a lot!! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    I loved it!, your poem was beautiful and so very sweet, great job!!! 5/5 from me =)

    xoxo Lucy

  • 14 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Aww... omg, that made me cry! You did such a great job on this and whoever you wrote this for is very lucky! I absolutely loved this. You described everything so beautifully and expressed your emotions very well. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a passionate poem with a great format that flows beautifully5>>>>

  • 14 years ago

    by Synh

    Awwww.... that was uber sweet and beautiful. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Deana

    This was so beautiful, It is so hard to lose the one you love so intensely.You are so right it affects every part of you,not just your heart, If this is real I hope you are healing and ready to love again.

  • 14 years ago

    by N M Lambert

    This brought shivers to me. amazing job xx