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I really liked this stenza.. it shows your feelings well enough to imagine easily.

Loving her,
Was more than just love itself.
Because, not only did it come from my heart,
But every single part
Of me.

How sweet!!! The descriptions are wonderful..You are a great poet... i like it a lot!! 5/5

I loved it!, your poem was beautiful and so very sweet, great job!!! 5/5 from me =)

xoxo Lucy

Aww... omg, that made me cry! You did such a great job on this and whoever you wrote this for is very lucky! I absolutely loved this. You described everything so beautifully and expressed your emotions very well. Great job on this! 5/5

This is a passionate poem with a great format that flows beautifully5>>>>

Awwww.... that was uber sweet and beautiful. 5/5

This was so beautiful, It is so hard to lose the one you love so intensely.You are so right it affects every part of you,not just your heart, If this is real I hope you are healing and ready to love again.

This brought shivers to me. amazing job xx