This is interresting..... it made me think..... i like it

Wow this was amazing. Great poem, I really enjoyed it.

Great pem covered by beautiful words. it is so deep and poetry style was it is one of the best.
great job
5/5

It was a really lovely poem:D
i can never write anything as figurative.
youve got talent.
wonderful work,keep it up!!
--lexie

It was a really lovely poem:D
i can never write anything as figurative.
youve got talent.
wonderful work,keep it up!!
--lexie

That was really good, I liked the way you wrote it and used the roses... very good! keep writing, great job!

Aww. It's so cute! Lol. I loved it! Not much to say about it...flow was good according to my standards, and depth in words and stanzas was good =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, that's deep. REAL deep. the last paragragh just swallows you as you read it, and I can just imagin everything perfectly. Beautiful, 5/5!

Good job sister. jello man what is jello? lol.

Hey love the poemm...thankx 4 tha comment

I LOVE this poem;o it's My fav poem now ur a great writer=)

-nessa.xo

Very short but written well, keep up the good work good buddy ol pal!! lol. bye

psycho

Beautiful write. It made me think about what i was reading and i like that in poetry. Great job. Beautiful use of vocab and overall just such a great write. Keep it up. =]

Omg. it was so beautiful and sad.
i loved how you could paint a picture in my mind. it was just beautiful

i loved it..
Amberinaa*

It was very beutifull i loved it! makes me think too! and it does has alot of meaning in it!

keep it up!

It was very good...and WOW! you get a lot of comments! lol just noticed that! Jpoet*

Wow!This is really awsome!I really like how you put it together.It was like being lost in a trance.SO COOL!Great work!

See this is another amazing poem! I'm adding you to my favorites :) When you dont add rhyming it sounds great but when you do... I just sigh in envy. I like the first 4 lines the best :)
5/5

Some poems dont make much since its sometimes just the beauty of the words

Great job! and it makes sense to me!