Iron Feathers

by The Flame Within   Jul 17, 2006


Thoughts
they cloud my mind
so simple
and yes simply thoughts
a line between reality and mentality
thoughts of being rich
but reality makes that hard
thoughts of finding love
but reality makes that almost impossible
so many thoughts that are in our minds
but they weigh so heavy on us
the things we think of
our wants
our needs
our desires
how heavy they are in our minds
and yet we walk around
with who knows how many thorugh our heads
thoughts, so many clloud our minds
so simple
and simpley hard to think of
thoughts
the iron feathers of our mind
so easy to see
but so heavy on us

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    *stares in awe* so deep. i absolutely loooove it!!

    "the iron feathers of our mind
    so easy to see
    but so heavy on us"

    amazing lines.

    "with who knows how many thorugh our heads"

    ...did u mean to put through?! anyways, keep up the stunning work!
    -xXx-

  • 17 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    This is good nick.......i gotta put the ones i created today on....Amanda