Your perfect girl

by .+.unpretty_loser.+.   Jul 20, 2006


Your perfect daughter had a breakdown last night,
Coz she couldn't handle what was going on in her life.
You'll find her body, but you'lll be too late.
You'll see the bloodstained sheets and the bloodstained blade.

Your perfect girlfriend couldn't handle life anymore,
You'll find her note lying next to her on the floor.
In it she says she loves you and she's sorry
for what she turned out to be.

Your perfect student took her life hours ago,
It was much to late for any one to utter the word no.
Her perfect grades and for ever smiling grin,
shows no sign of madness that she suppressed within.

Your perfect friend gave up on a battle she couldn't win
She calls it freedom, others call it a sin.
She sends you a kiss and a hug, wherever she is,
and some day, in heaven you'll meet again.

Your perfect daughter had a breakdown last night,
Your perfect girlfriend couldn't handle life anymore,
Your perfect student took her life hours ago,

please pretty plese comment, vote
Your perfect friend gave up on a battle she couldn't win

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  • 17 years ago

    by I HATE You.

    Omg thats so sad!I almost started to cry cause I know how it feels.
    Sometimes I feel the same way. I fight with my parents alot and stuff, and I cry myself to sleep. . .
    Well I hope your life is ok and stuff =]
    Keep up the good work with your poems too. I love them! I can actualy relate. Im trying to put more up though.
    Oh and try not to let things get you down. listen to music to get your mind off of things and stuff!

  • 17 years ago

    by Illusion

    Wow. This is a beautifully written poem. I can almost relate to it. You're a very good writer. 5/5

    -Shan-

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    Im so jelous of your writing ability keep up the good work hun xoxo