This is a beautiful peom. i am sorry about that love but i know how it feels to always wonder what could have been

Very well written. I loved the content. I have had this experience. You are very talented, keep up the good work.5/5

Very nicely penned Michelle, enjoyed, great job!!!

It's a beautifully written poem. I really love your poems!

Hey darl a very touching piece. very heartfelt. great use of words. lot of emotion in it keep it up xx

What could have been?? Imagination / Hope / Dream / Fantasies...what would be life without them??
I believe with every regret comes a piece of fantasy...what could have been if?????
Well u potrayed all these complex feelings in a very simple and beautiful manner here.
Glad to have u back after such a long time.

all the best and take care
5/5

Hey,
Beautiful poem..."What Could Have Been" we make this question a lot of times during our live...ur poems are amazing

Keep it up ;)

Does time really heal all pain and scars...i guess not...momentarily,it moves them out of our sight....but time and again,it makes us to remember what we have missed or lost in life....Nice poem....Something very realistic....take care and keep smiling always...

Oh sweetie!
what a wonderful poem of yours!
very great work I love every stanza!
you're one of my greatest fellows here,lol!
you have so much talent hidden inside!

keep writing I miss your poems so much. as you don't write much and hvn't written anything in so long!

Keep up your excellent work
thanks for your inspiration!
Love You
NemO xoxoxoxoxox

For all sad words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these, 'It might have been.' True many times we do regret and remember past with a wonder why things couldn't be better but there's a reason 4 everything and i guess one has 2 accept that. A wonderful job.

Absolutely beautiful penned, yet well expressed emotions.....like the every stanza, simply but wonderful done, keep writing, coz it will help you...take care, best wishes from west. bert.

Beatiful write,handsome poem.Love so sweet,yet so far from reality.Faith can conquer it all,faith from all the mountains.Keep writting.

Sometimes, we unknowingly cross love and stop not to look back at what we have lost. what you have written is a beautiful way of describing that.

missed reading your work, Mich.

love and luck
shobhana

I really liked this poem. well u left me a comment on my poem Last Dance a few months ago and just wanted to say thanks. and that poem which is about taht girl well we got together then about a few months lata she broke up with me.
well great poem 5/5

I love this poem! i can relate to it, so i think thats why its so wonderful! your an amazing writer, good job!

!!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
I return the favor if you comment back

This is an adorable poem =)

Hey cool poem
nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
thanksss :)

What could have been I think something we all wonder at sometime in our lives. Good job!

Life has a strange way of working out
There is no point of looking back or wondering
You have your own life and now I have mine
Yet I cant help but to think what could have been

This sums it all up.
Take care Cindy

This was really sweet i liked it alott