Comments : What Could Have Been

  • 14 years ago

    by Nessa

    This is a beautiful peom. i am sorry about that love but i know how it feels to always wonder what could have been

  • 14 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very well written. I loved the content. I have had this experience. You are very talented, keep up the good work.5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely penned Michelle, enjoyed, great job!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sourav

    It's a beautifully written poem. I really love your poems!

  • 14 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a very touching piece. very heartfelt. great use of words. lot of emotion in it keep it up xx

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    What could have been?? Imagination / Hope / Dream / Fantasies...what would be life without them??
    I believe with every regret comes a piece of fantasy...what could have been if?????
    Well u potrayed all these complex feelings in a very simple and beautiful manner here.
    Glad to have u back after such a long time.

    all the best and take care
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by â—ŠJâ—Š

    Hey,
    Beautiful poem..."What Could Have Been" we make this question a lot of times during our live...ur poems are amazing

    Keep it up ;)

  • 14 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Does time really heal all pain and scars...i guess not...momentarily,it moves them out of our sight....but time and again,it makes us to remember what we have missed or lost in life....Nice poem....Something very realistic....take care and keep smiling always...

  • 14 years ago

    by Nee

    Oh sweetie!
    what a wonderful poem of yours!
    very great work I love every stanza!
    you're one of my greatest fellows here,lol!
    you have so much talent hidden inside!

    keep writing I miss your poems so much. as you don't write much and hvn't written anything in so long!

    Keep up your excellent work
    thanks for your inspiration!
    Love You
    NemO xoxoxoxoxox

  • 14 years ago

    by Just Wishes

    For all sad words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these, 'It might have been.' True many times we do regret and remember past with a wonder why things couldn't be better but there's a reason 4 everything and i guess one has 2 accept that. A wonderful job.

  • 14 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Absolutely beautiful penned, yet well expressed emotions.....like the every stanza, simply but wonderful done, keep writing, coz it will help you...take care, best wishes from west. bert.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jeff

    Beatiful write,handsome poem.Love so sweet,yet so far from reality.Faith can conquer it all,faith from all the mountains.Keep writting.

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Sometimes, we unknowingly cross love and stop not to look back at what we have lost. what you have written is a beautiful way of describing that.

    missed reading your work, Mich.

    love and luck
    shobhana

  • 14 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    I really liked this poem. well u left me a comment on my poem Last Dance a few months ago and just wanted to say thanks. and that poem which is about taht girl well we got together then about a few months lata she broke up with me.
    well great poem 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by LiZaBeTh

    I love this poem! i can relate to it, so i think thats why its so wonderful! your an amazing writer, good job!

  • 13 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    !!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
    Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
    Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

    If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
    I return the favor if you comment back

  • 13 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    This is an adorable poem =)

  • 13 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey cool poem
    nice to see that people are still working toward good poetry
    if u dont mind, could u please rate and comment my new poem THE LITTLE THINGS YOU DO
    ill be sure to return the favor once u comment and rate
    thanksss :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Cindy

    What could have been I think something we all wonder at sometime in our lives. Good job!

    Life has a strange way of working out
    There is no point of looking back or wondering
    You have your own life and now I have mine
    Yet I cant help but to think what could have been

    This sums it all up.
    Take care Cindy

  • 12 years ago

    by L3AH

    This was really sweet i liked it alott