Souls that dont heal

by brkendown   Jul 21, 2006


My heart is broken
my soul wont heal
you hurt me once again
this time it feels so real

my life was oh so good
my life is now all gone
im so lost inside
im going to die

you took my heart
you made it yours
you fixed it all up
now its on the floor

i trusted you
with all my heart
now you have left me
im in the dark!

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  • 17 years ago

    by missy

    I like this poem, just the rhyming and flow sometimes get out of place but the meaning and words are so powerful....

  • 17 years ago

    by Sam

    Not one of my favorites i thought the poems were jus a little cliche and comparaed to ur other AWESOME poems this one kinda feel flat 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by natalie

    Short,sharp and simply! i like it 5/5 keep up the great writing! :) X

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