Sorry

by *Daniel94*   Jul 23, 2006


While I sit here crying
I thought this isn't fair,
I told him that I was sorry
but it seems he cannot care.

I know he can not hear me
but I tell him just in case,
one day I hope he'll hear me
and again I'll see his face.

soon he'll visit the pearly gates
with angels all around
then he'll know just what it's like
when heaven has been found

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  • 17 years ago

    by herewithme

    Hey hey...i live in melbourne. yourself?
    you will be that good if u keep it up. ive been writing since i was about your age and my stuff wasnt half as good as yours.

  • 17 years ago

    by herewithme

    Nicely written
    cant believe you're only 12! keep writing you have the talent....
    kat - xox

  • 17 years ago

    by Pain Remains

    Cute poem well done
    Jade x

  • 17 years ago

    by Maree

    This is a really good poem. You write so well or someone so young.

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