Young girl

by x-aLeX bAbe-x   Jul 23, 2006


Young girl how do you feel,
when you lie down and cry,
young girl the pain you feel,
makes you want to die.

a smile for you is a million miles away,
all hope you felt has faded,
not even the joy of life can make you smile,
and your wisdom is all out dated.

a candle burnt to the bottom,
useless and colorless,
a child of many problems,
a degraded and bruised mess,

powerless and unstable,
young girl why don't you eat,
why do you have to punish yourself,
you have become so weak.

young girl your like water,
lying dead out in the sea,
floating further into the ocean,
it moves softly and quietly.

young girl i think your brilliant,
to have coped through all the pain,
i shall be your guiding friend,
ill make you smile again.

young girl you are so beautiful,
but your problems have destroyed you,
your beautiful body is faded frail,
your face is black and blue.

don't let depression defeat you,
look at yourself in the mirror,
this person looking back isn't you,
theres so much to reconsider.

depression is a person,
not friend but indeed a foe,
don't let it take over your body,
you have to take control.

so young girl tell me how you feel,
when you lay down there and cry,
why does the pain you feel,
make you want to die.

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostForever

    I loved it. i can really relate to it. xxx by the way its {crying and dead inside} i have changed my name! xxx

  • *5* I LOVE THIS POEM SOO EFFIN MUCH! [its great. :D && Thanks for the comment. =] ]

  • 17 years ago

    by courtney

    Wow um i dont know what to say it was great 5/5
    ~courtney~

  • 17 years ago

    by chixanoodle

    Alex its very good keep it up u should be a poet

  • 17 years ago

    by x factor

    Filled with some much emotions, wording is great, simply a great peom