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by meekii Jul 23, 2006 category : Love, romance / lost love
Tell me he loves me tell me he cares tell me i wont have to spend my life without him there tell me he misses me tell me he cries tell me that the things he said were just lies lies to protect me lies that'll help me mend please tell me that the lies were just pretend tell me he wants me tell me we'll be tell me these things so my heart wont be this empty even if untrue please tell me so because i cant seem to let you go..
by ENTROPY
Very good job. but in this part "lies to protect me lies that'll help me mend please tell me that the lies were pretend" i think it would flow better if you said "were just pretend" it seems short to me, thanks. love and luck, mollyjade