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by Dana   Jul 24, 2006


The anonymous
lurking around the streets,
his moonlit chamber.
Collar up,
hat down.
Covering the lustrous skin,
the piercing eyes,
the clandestine beauty.

An alacritous response to my presence
surprises me with a blur.
A sudden seize of the shoulders,
shocks and arouses.
His cold embrace
fills you with tremors of bliss,
insurmountable pleasure and pain.
Fulfills your every imaginable fantasy,
washing the scars off your disguise.

Head locked back,
his stamina kills me.
Two impalement's leaking confused cells
wondering this strange mythology.
His eyes gleaming,
darkening with laughter
as I am introduced to his veins.

** Criticism welcome with open arms..please!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. what an amazing write. the ending is what really made me kind of shiver. i find that you are so precise in your wording and that's what makes me so intriuged to read more! great job, and keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    I lovelovelovelovelove this poem.. and idont know why.. i wish i could tel but the whole thing is just fantastic.. your extensive vocabulary.. which i am so jelous of makes your poems sound all the better

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Where do you get your words from??? so much creation, i really liked it.