Fall From Grace

by goddess-glamourpuss   Jul 25, 2006


I am your darling no more
This time I shocked you to the core
Thought I had put you through the mill
Now you must swallow this bitter pill

To please you I would do my best
Each time you put me to the test
Perfect daughter i can no longer be
I need to find my identity

So off I went upon my quest
Doing now what I thought best
Until the day I crash and burn
To you though, I could not turn

I tried by best, I really did
To keep my secret safely hid
The smile I wore was out of place
But for you I put it on my face

Then one day it all came out
You didn't cry, you didn't shout
But I could see it in your face
My very sudden fall from grace

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Another favourite of mine.
    I can relate to this a lot, and the imagery was amazing, as was the flow and wording.
    I thought it would go better in the sad category, but it works here too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Mmm. That was a very sweet and cute poem. Not sure if I could relate but none the less it was amazing. I loved how it ryhmed, and the flows was excellent.

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww it's so sweet. I can't much relate, but it's cute just the same lol. Great write once again. I liked the flow, and the rhyiming scheme was good. Excellent job! =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    This poem brought home to me how I
    had my daughter on a pedestal too. I
    am sure I expected too much. It was a good reminder, thank you. Thank you for your kind words about my
    poem (Lesson learned)
    Deana

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I don't get why you put this is the 'Friendship' poems...

    But anyways, the flow was great. I didn't much enjoy how you told the poem, sorry.

    xDarkSuicidex 4.5

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