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by Phantasmagoria   Jul 27, 2006


Bloody Heart
lay still
forever.
No hope to kill.
Sleep now
tired soul
never again
open your eyes.
Sickened,
you bid farewell
in a puddle
of empty lies.
My mind
spinning
downward
sinning.
No belief
to save me.
Tombstone
engrave me,
" Goodbye forever more."

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  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Weres all the rhymes? good lay out though, great words too.

    october xx

  • 17 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    I ♥ this!! its really good!!!thx 4 the comment on my poem!♥

  • 17 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is a great poem, you have a very cool way of expressing yourself in your poetry. good work. plz read my two new poems Take My Life and Butterfly thanx

  • 17 years ago

    by Megan

    Idk wha it is bout ur poems but i seem to luv them all...i luv ur syntax...ur imagrey...ur style...ur a wonderful writer

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