Again a brilliant poem, but why are you so sad lil sis?? I am very worried about you now, what is going on in your life?? Please tell me....Just hold on and I know you will be strong enough to get through this depression...

I love you LYLAS

Hey Jenie,
i haven't talked to you in a while,
thanks for the comment and i really liked this poem it was a little sad though, but the rhymes were fabulous.
~xoxo,
Angie

You should make a movie you sound like you have a crazy imagination and you wrote this poem on my birthday 7-26. well see you round jenie

Wow this is incredible!! =] love the emotions you give!! excellent keep it up gurl =] hehe.

P.S~thanx for the comment it means soooo much!

Wow cool graet poem shows a lot :)

Its great jenie <33

=D Wow! I like it! So sad yet so predictable. very well written. I liked it alot good recommendation your a wonderful writter jenie ;)

Wish I could say just a few last words
I try to yell out, but my throat is dry
sadly I only heard...
"why did you do this?
I love you...baby, goodbye"

you know this tanza touched my heart. aaah. such a great words you have used. nice feelings and emotions aswell througout the poem great work i will must give you 5/5

SOO GOOD 10/10! BUT SOO SAD MADE ME CRY