Just a poem that I found in one of my old journal tonight, It is when I use to be 17 while I was in high school.

Short and sweet I like it

Wow, great piece.
I don't know why, but I really got use to ur poems and I feel its hard to live without your words.
Looking for your new poems soon as every hour I check your profile for a new poem.

I loved this poem..it was short but it was fillled with lots of emotions..i can relate to this ALOT!! you wrote it perfectly! the flow and rhythm was greaet! 5/5

Nice flow, though the words you used are basic.

How mean?! if she doesnt care she probably aint the right one for ya! you r a gr8 writer and i love your work soo much!!
This poem was another great one!!
5/5

TORM

Not too far, not too close. Oh well, that is love.
"Not too far
Not too close
Like the rain
Come and goes."
That was a good use of words and imagery... it makes me think of lovers kissing in the rain.

//T.L.//

This poem describes a feeling of being in love and the fear of rejection in the short reps of four quatrains I LIKE IT

WOW! in this poem! i loved the way you reapeated not to far not to near, and not to far not to close,,, it was asome,,, the words flowed very well like a song :D 5/5

This poem was nice and short but the ending kind of turned me off for some reason. not your best work but good poem all the same. Keep it up!!:D

I liked it very much..the rythema and the fellow of the poem...its one of ur best poem..iam suprised u haven't posted till now.....i loved it very much..wonderful job goran

Great poem! I have a very similar one called "love"! I think it was very good, short and sweet just the way I like em!

-AnnMarie

This short poem is nicely done. the repitition sets it smoothly. nice job. 5/5
Driver

I love the way that it is short and sweet but says so much.. great poem xx

The ending of the poem is one unexpected and though this poem was written in the smallest amount of words it is very powerful and heartfelt. Keep it up! I love it! xxx

In such little words, it says a lot... Very deep and yet small. Good write, though not your best.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I agree to dark suicide small words and yet you says alot not to long not too short but this is great man i like it...

Awww thats really sad!!! im sure she really did though shes just stuck up ;)

xoxo Lucy

That's so sad. I love how you repeated the same lines, but you still switched them up. 5/5

- Thanks for reading my poem -

~ Tina

Great poem, but I bet she does care..