Untitled

by Shenekia   Jul 30, 2006


You wait for the rain but it never comes.
Think about the one you love but they
not thinking about you.
Dream about your future,
but its not coming true.
Care for that someone, when
they dont give a dam about you.
Crying for ever when it only takes
some minutes.
Forgetting yourself when
everybody esle had.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Deaths Maiden

    A grand write with good description and a strong moral.
    I understood and agreed with what you had to say.
    It would be interesting and an idea if you were to extend on it a little more, I'd like to read more on this poem if only your willing to share.
    Much love and hate.

    ~Deaths Maiden~

  • 19 years ago

    by SilenceBreaksTheHeart

    I can really relate to this one. I loved the emotion you put into it, it was really beautiful. I liked your word choice with this write...well done.
    You have a lot of talent.
    Great job.
    5/5
    Breanna

More Poems By Shenekia