I Lost Who I Loved

by Jacqui Armstrong   Jul 30, 2006


I sit and look at pictures of you,
"I love you" "love you too"
Remember how it use to be.
then I realise what made me see

a week went past the gap it grew
it wasn't long I realised we were through
I should have known but I still had hope
You were all I wanted, you helped me cope.

I had doubts we talked it through
A special love just me and you.
My friends told me stories of
How friendships can build the best love.

But now I see it was better before
When we were just friends, when I knew the score
The friendship we had, seems to be lost
One relationship with an expensive cost.

There was someone I could always turn to
Someone special, that someone was you
Now I just feel alone, and broken inside
I lost count of when I cried

Just so you know, I do still care
I understand why your not there
But please know that deep inside
I think I regret what we tried

I wish we were just as before
We didn't need that little more
We went further than we needed to
But please remember I still love you!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    OMG I absolutely love it. It was sooo true

  • 16 years ago

    by Mo

    I thought this poem was really true - Its funny cause we always think that a relationship is that next step on from being best mates - when really... being best mates is the top of the love chain!

    Well written - I feel your pain. Pity you lost the best friend you had.

    Mo
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Judy

    It was really sweet and i loved it.. it was sort of sad in some places but really really good written...

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Another cute one. You are a good writer. This poem shows how much your friendship really means to you.

    Just so you know, I do still care
    I understand why your not there
    But please know that deep inside
    I think I regret what we tried

    This poem explains everything.
    Great Job!
    5/5
    =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Startle Me

    "I love you" "love you too"
    I thought that that was pretty random

    a week went past[[,]] the gap it grew
    Comma there, babez..

    Honestly?
    This would be a whole lot better
    If you used punctuation.

    There's an article about why it WOULD be better.
    Written a special someone from this poem site.
    If you would like to read it, PM me :]

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