Wow BEAUTIFUL! i really like it... you have such a way in expressing yourself... it has such a way that captivates people... the rhyming was great too... keep up the great work!

ps: if you hav time... read my Made in tears! :D

~angel~

Certainly was an excellent use of descriptive language. The only thing I would have wanted different (this is a small change, and rather insignificant) is that you used the cloud metaphor in two parts of your poem, the 2nd and 3rd stanza, and I thought you could replace one of the cloud metaphors with a different one -- spice things up a bit.

AWW! I loved this poem! Just LOVED it! Lol. I know I'm being a bit ecstatic >.< I liked the flow, and all the lines were almost the same length, which i sometimes have trouble doing lol. Keep it up! =) xoxo 5/5

Samantha

Absolutely beautiful. I think this is one of your best works. Maybe its that I adore love poems, but it is actually that good. 5/5 keep up the good work Loretta

Talee --
Aww, so cute! I loved this. The rhyming and the flow didn`t seem forced at all -- they were perfect! Your spelling and grammar, was flawless as well. =D. You did a wonderful job, as usual. Keep it up! 5/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

This was a very nice love poem!!It made me think of how much love fills our lives..the flow was pretty good, just a bit off in some places, but over all it was very Cute=)

Beautiful job, great descriptions too. Though it would be nice if you could somehow shorten your lines.

Hey darl a very touhing piece. beautifully written. such beautiful words. very well written. good job on this one. l0ved it xx

Lol.. that is so weird.. i could swear that i commented this before.. hmm.. lol.. anyways, it was an amazing poem! the flow was effortless and your rhymes were perfect.. the emotion was clear and your descriptions were b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l! loved it taleee! and as i have said before :P this WILL happen to you.. love youu!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! At the ends I got chills! How adorable! It's kind of long, but how adorable! So sweet, so tender, so perfect! Great Job!

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow Nat, wow. This was absolutely amasing, don't you ever doubt your talent. I usuallly hate reading love poems, but this one was definately an exception, you wrote this so beautifully, and i loved every word. You are so talented! I love you

--Steph

AwW,what a beautiful poem! Its one of the sweetest that ive read by far, indeed.The rhyming was great and the ending was so cute! I really loved this poem.You are a wonderful writer, girl!Great work, keep writing like that!
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Excellent poem.. very sweet and extremely well written 5/5 xx

You got an almostOttava Rime. Try to extend it you got ababcc try getting abababcc it will be better recognized by the poetic community.

Oh my gosh! i absolutely adored this piece. the writing was so brilliant and beautiful. i can't even use all the words to discribe how much i loved it, it was amazing. definatly keep it up, 100/5.

heidi may

A very good strong ending to a brilliant poem, i love your style of writing its very graceful and each of your poems explore something different. im going to add u to my favs as u r an insppiration to me :)

-biscuit-

A very good strong ending to a brilliant poem, i love your style of writing its very graceful and each of your poems explore something different. im going to add u to my favs as u r an inspiration to me :)

-biscuit-

I love your poem, this is one of my favourites. Very good work, i look forward to reading some of your other poems, well done!!

Brilliant

Wow!that was a great poem u have alot of talent... i wish i was that good lol but that was a beautiful poem good job!!!