Becoming Cold

by Nick Hanshaw   Aug 1, 2006


To hate myself is to show my inner pain
to love myself is to hide in shame
to bring out the pain is to gain inner peace
to hide the pain is to destroy myself inside out
to gain inner piece will save me
to desroy myself is bring more pain
to save myself is to be able to see tomarrow
to bring more pain is to die
to see tomarrow is to be able to hate myself for another day and start the process over again

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by RawrItsDollfacex

    Wow nick i seriously cant believe you think that of yourself.. i miss you alot nick.. i really do i want you back...
    Brandy

    www.myspace.com/broken_bones_broken_heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Lacey Rose

    Very emotional lol

  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Mmhm. Lovely poem, Nick. Sad.
    5/5

    xx.N-G-C-S.xx

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    U shouldnt hate urself u know tht....and u better not get urself in more pain k babe.....but i lik it butdislikeit at the same time soo......ill still give it a 5 though..

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet_tears

    WOW!!!!this is way better than the other one the others are great but this one brung a tear to my eye.I LOVE IT. So much emotions so much pain.You shouldnt feel this way,*HUGS* but this is awesome.
    Love, Sweet Tearsxoxo

Read All Comments (7)

More Poems By Nick Hanshaw