Harder To Breathe

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 2, 2006


You're pulling me out to sea,
Making it harder to breathe,
And I miss you so,
But times moving too slow.
I need you here now,
To pull me out of this crowd.
Just wipe away my tears,
Take my burdens- my fears.
One day we'll live forever,
Our love with endeavor...
You're pulling me out to sea,
You're making it harder to breathe,
But in our lost ocean,
There's so much motion,
Save me now,
Pull me from this crowd,
I'm slipping away-
But not today.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another "WOW" poem

  • 17 years ago

    by -The-Undying-

    Take my burdens- my fears.
    I loved the repitition of your pulling me out of the sea.. very good! Rather dull though.

  • 17 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    I didnt vote on this poem cause i honestly couldnt give it a 5. sorry. it was just like all the other love poem. it was still good but it wasn't unique like your other ones so i guess it didnt earn a 5 compared to your other poems. i did like how it started off slow then got faster toward the end though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I don't know whether this is supposed to be sweet or sad. It feels both to me. I like it though. Another great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Polly

    I like this, it's a love poem but with a sort of mystical desperation about it...
    "But times moving too slow" I think should be:
    "But time's moving too slow"

    Other than that it's great well done. 5/5
    Polly

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