Where are u grandpa

by Misha   Aug 2, 2006


Where are u grandpa
i can not say grandpa again
i feel i don't have a grandpa
i start to cry when i see a grandpa
with his little girl i really really miss u
where are u i wish u were hear u died when i was 3
and ur little girl is now 8
starting yr 4 were are u
u were not here for my 4th brithday
were are u grandpa i miss u
i miss u saing here's my little girl
i really miss u were are u grandpa
me and saajan miss
i hope u can hear this right now

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow such a powerful and upsetting poem, you wrote it well.. just some helpfull feedback;
    in the 6th line you wrote 'hear'..its supposed to be 'here'
    and in the 8th line you wrote; 'were'.. it is supposed to be 'where'..change that and the poem is perfect :) keep writting please read and comment on my poems.. rhank you... kirsty palmer xx