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Good imagery and excellent language 'clandestine whispers' - that is beautiful. But pleeeeease dont be lazy about punctuation. Its easy but it makes sooo much difference. look:

Clap of thunder.
Clandestine whispers,
masked by
the decieving smiles.
Slowly gives way
to the end of the world.
Return to where I belong
my Master, my Lord, Satan.

I liked it more....
would have liked it to be longer, though
i liked the topic though; all apocolypsy and stuff haha
nIce
~HazE

I liked it i just wised it was longer

I couldnt get into this poem. there wasnt anything to pull me into it i guess...
instead of... "Clap of Thunder"
try... "The Roaring Thunder Clashed" or something to draw the reader at the beggining of the poem.

keep it up :D and good job :)

~Terra

Do you worship the devil are you from the dark side lol wow bit short agai but good i liked it anyways