by Deathcanwait   Aug 4, 2006

Like a shiny, silver needle
Youre deeper than my skin
Like the medicine it gives
Soothing right within
Like a pain relieving aspirin
You help to clear my head
Theres only you to think of
And all those things you said
Like a phoenix burning strongly
Healing when it cries
A magical lasting signal
Lighting up my sky
I wouldnt have these things
If I couldnt be with you
Could mistake you for an angel
For helping me pull through
Like a candle in the night
Enabling me to see
Aiding me through darkness
Always guarding me
Like a delicate, warming flame
That I never want to smother
You havent lost your beauty
From lighting up another
That other being me
I will always be in your debt
The most tender, perfect rose
The most beautiful Ive ever met.


Copyright © 2006 M.H.


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  • 13 years ago

    by Sweet Little Lie

    Wow this is so beautiful great poem 10/10

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a tender beautiful poem. Imagery is excellent. Your love shines in this piece.

    The most tender, perfect rose
    The most beautiful Ive ever met.

    Love these lines.
    take care Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I really like the verse, "Like a delicate, warming flame that I never want to smother. You haven't lost your beauty from lighting up another." Great job!!! 5/5! And thanx for your comments!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jerbear

    Great! I almost started crying! I've never done drugs (which I'm guessing is part of this poem, but I can still see a great mental image! try checking out some of my stuff!