This girl

by giggles   Aug 4, 2006


Have you ever looked
into those big hazel eyes
then you would know
the story of one girls pride

the hurt and the pain
the sorrow and the tears
they heal a part of her
from all past years

the love and the laughter
the smiles and the grin
tell of all obstacles
that this girl did win

the love in her heart
the sparkle in her eye
give you all you'll need
they tell you why

so love this girl
and hold her true
cuz without her
you cant be you

ashley
8-3-06
4:12 pm

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  • 15 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This was a nice piece. Unique, different from most pieces. I like the theme of the piece, but some of the lines seemed forced, due to the need of rhyme. Like, I think the beginning of each stanza was very nice, and flowed perfectly. But then the last two lines were forced, because you needed the lines to rhyme. But regardless, the piece was great. I liked it (: 5/5

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