Peace

by giggles   Apr 1, 2009


So said you would always be there
as you held me close.
you said you would always want me
but here i am alone.

the daughter i raise
the hurt inside.

broken heart
broken dreams

it will be ok
i dont need you
i am stronger
then u will ever know.

my daughter smiles
it lights up my world
a world u chose to leave
a world u chose not to know

dont come back
we wont be there
we grow up and leave this place
and we learn how to move on

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  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Sad piece indeed. wen the one you love goes away from your life and ur child.

    So said you would always be there
    as you held me close.
    you said you would always want me
    but here i am alone.

    is my favorite part. many promise this. to never leave urside, to always be there for you. but they never keep to it. it breaks us apart cuz we trusted them. but like you said in ur piece you are strong n u can move on for your daughter nad urself. i like it.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I feel can read between the lines in this sad romantic chat-room style sharing of emotion

    So said you would always be there

    I found myself wondering whether you meant
    So sad, I felt you would always be there
    you said would always be there

    in spite of my confusion the emotion come through poetically