by Bill Turner Aug 4, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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I have stains upon my soul |
by hani
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Very nice and beautiful |
by Natalie
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Very nice. Your rhyming scheme is very nice. Many poems, in my opinion, have rhyming schemes that take away from the poem's meaning. Your's fit very well. Good job! |
by Jyoti Rawat
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Wow very good. |
by Jasmyn
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This was good |
by C Cattaway
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Aww.. This is very touching. 'Around the corner' seems so far away when contentedness is there where you are. This is beautifully written. Well done. xx |