I really loved this one...very well written and it had a good flow to it. Great job.
5/5
Breanna

This poem could use a little work..

It's descriptive enough to actually be a great poem, but the format, and flow of the poem is off.

I think I get a good visual of this poem, but the poem is just not there for me, the presentation of the poem is not welcoming to my eyes, and the sentences are mostly uneven..

Nice job, keep up the good work, poems like this can make a difference.

I like it! It creates an image for you. it seems really real and it i like the way it flows.

Thank you for the comment

Jemma

I really liked this poem. I liked the flow and the feeling of dark and strain from it, it was excellent.

and thanks for the comment.

I like this very much. it is very well written and deep.

It was good.
and it was emotional.
those are always the best.

I loved it.
you have talent.

Bravo.:)

I luvd it...flows great and its dark and deep..its beautiful

This is really good...really sad, but still awesome...keep it up! 5/5
~Jules

Reall sad, reall good
how do u get inspiration???

5/5 ;)

I liked this one the best of the four featured poems, have to add you to my favourites

I love this one!

Awesome AWESOME AWESOME! Your poems are really cool!

Oooh i like this one
sometimes i relate...

You have so much talent, hun. Never give that up. Another 5/5 from me.

This is beautifully written and the question at the end took my breath away. incredible write, 5/5