Stay true

by bon   Aug 5, 2006


Don't feel bad
when others bring you down
its not your fault
you shouldn't be the one to frown

just keep your head up high
and don't let the rain stop you
theres no reason to lie
just try and stay true

life will get better
the sun will soon shine
and before you know it
you'll have a life thats divine

believe in what you are
and stay true and kind
and before you know it
true friends you will find

learn from your mistakes
try and look past the strife
no one should be alone
when living a beautiful life

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  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    Aww. this was awesome. i loved it hun

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I really like this. The message behind it is vivid and clear. I think you could have expanded the emotion in your stanza's, and maybe elaborated on them to make them longer. However, a very enjoyable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    I think this is really good.if someone is feeling down and they read this poem im sure they will have pride for themselves.

  • 18 years ago

    by andreea

    Very nice, but it's just an advice that almost nobody can take..

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