Once I Loved You

by BrokenMisery   Aug 6, 2006


Another smile to the disaster you encrypted
On my backbone, your tale scripted.
Paralysed by the blasphemy on your tongue,
Framed as your victim, to watch you prey on the young
(and innocent).

Stained your cheap dress in wine,
Kisses laced with decline,
(you traded yourself short).

Drown as you love yourself in vain,
Tears of the lies your insides contain.
Beauty slept inside your impure core,
For you’re not perfect, not anymore.

Spitting on your upturned funeral bed, your eternity
Little damned princess of modernity.
There's no forgiveness kiss in the make-up,
No blood covenant for your hiccup
(not anymore).

Stained your cheap dress in wine,
Kisses laced with decline,
(you traded yourself short).

Drown as you love yourself in vain,
Tears of the lies your insides contain.
Beauty slept inside your impure core,
For you’re not perfect, not anymore.

You were everything I held close,
I loved you the most
(only to watch you walk away).

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  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    This is deep ... I loved it . You used
    the perfect words and painted the
    perfect picture . You kept me
    captivated and thats kind of hard to do
    I've always told you that you were one
    of the best and after reading this . I
    stand by my words .

    Keep up the good work

    Love ya
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Letty

    WOW.....You've out done yourself
    again . How have things been going ?
    Sorry I haven't read or commented on
    any of your work in awhile, but I've
    been away . I'm looking forward to
    reading more of your masterpieces .

    XOXO
    Letty

  • 17 years ago

    by Hayley

    Hey i love this, thanks for the comment... idk its just what i'm goin thru now...ahhh its shitty! but I LOVE YOUR poem!! you are awesome...xpesially love this part:
    You were everything I held close,
    I loved you the most
    (only to watch you walk away).
    amazing total 5/5 !! keep it up, comment some of my other poems!!
    -hayley

  • 17 years ago

    by Aussie

    Wow...very deep poem. u gave every detel. it's a amazing poem:)

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