This funny thing called life

by emily   Aug 6, 2006


**This wasn't one of my best but if you could still comment then that would be great thanks**

I play a game that is funny
Life is its name
ever since i started it
i wasn't quite sure about this game

If you loose
add another cut
upon your little wrists
you are in luck

When i play this game
i am filled with awe
will i stay here?
or will i be no more?

I am watching the blood drip down
onto the sparkling floor
and think how mum wanted me to be perfect
but she ain't gonna wish that no more

Because soon enough, i will be dead
i will loose my funny game
but even if this happens,
the world will still be the same.

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  • 17 years ago

    by tearsxunseen

    Hey it's alissa! I don't know if I've commented on this one before... oh well. even if i did i am going to do it again. i like it a lot. i guess it just makes sense.

  • 17 years ago

    by *~H3LL Iz 3MPTY @LL TH3 D3VIL$ @R3 H3R3~*

    Sorry it suppose 2 say thinkin about u

  • 17 years ago

    by *~H3LL Iz 3MPTY @LL TH3 D3VIL$ @R3 H3R3~*

    Every night
    theres about 10pple who lie awake u
    ever day theres bout 10 pple who got u on there mind
    every day theres one person who want to tell u who they feel
    and if u die they'll never get a chance and thre life might as well end
    sokeep ya self alive cuz ur poems arerockin and i kw theres a special som out thtr all of ur
    (sorry the essay lol)

  • 17 years ago

    by *screenplayofdesire*

    Awesome
    from the heart
    i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Destinys Pain

    Theres always someone that will be sad... always, no matter what you think. this was a really great poem. u keep up ur writing and ur spirits and have courage!

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