Angel's Battle

"Blood of the Angel's fall from above."
[I would write "Blood of 'an' Angel's, fall from above" or "Blood of Angels fall from above" (the) didn't seem to fit with it]

"Yet as they did the Angel's fell,"
["the 'Angels' fell" It would be plural in this line]

Which ever works better for you. This was a really good poem, and I'm not quite sure why I missed it, but glad I read it. I know you've written better poetry, but to be better, you need to write poems like this that are used as stepping stones. So good job on this one.

While your first stanza was really storng, and the imagery especially vivid, your second stanza falls a bit weak:
You'd never have thought,
Glorious things would have faught,
With these two above lines using the word you'd shatters the illusion reminding the reader that this is a poem for entertainment and that they are not locked in the poem's world during the time reading it.

Love this poem, truly amazing. I like all of it, its just a great poem.

Wings of an Angel

Omg thats so sad... angels shouldnt be compeating for Gods love...

Glorious things would have [faught,]
^Fought^

Great write. =) I loved how short it was, but you managed to express yourself in its length. Something a lot of people can't do very well. Keep 'em coming! =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha